mercury313
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can only agree with that
NEVER HUNGER! NEVER TIRE! NEVER FEAR! FOR THE UNDEAD LEGION!
nice Part of the Story 👍. Gimme Mooore!
I LOVE THIS STORY!
Good Idea I Like it👍
Lets be positive: you will overcome it and are going to write better chapters than before. Yay! 😃
Maybe Something Like: "end of Stage one" because you hinted that our Main caracter has also has Something in Store for their Business/Family.