SkeetSkirt

How deep?

Everybody lacks time fool.

A person who thinks all of the time has nothing to think about except thoughts. 🤔🤔

You can’t just disrespect pokemon like that 😭 this guy is worse

I looked at your response and an hour later got notified that CO got 3 chaps suddenly (o.o)

As always, MLB does not disappoint. This novel has been great so far and I can’t wait to see how it continues. However, please make sure not to abandon your other novels, though it’s okay to focus on this one for a bit. Dual Cultivation and Cultivation Online don’t seem to be getting updated currently, and I would hate for them to be cut short.

While it can be argued that an exclamation mark used over and over again can convey such tones, I personally feel as if they are misplaced, as they seem to be trying too hard to make the story exciting. If a story is written well, there is no need for such excessive usage, and can even ruin the mood or turn readers away if they dislike this method of excitement. Generally, I’m just saying that overusing an ”!” Feels weird to readers and can convey the wrong tone at times.

Lord_Vancheltz was talking about a friend of theirs in real life whose son was killed, rather than the beast which was not appeased due to the death of his sons murderer. They were relating to the story and sharing their own experience, not entirely commenting on what just occurred within the novel.

Not the bears son, the commenters friends child

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