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Joshua_Galbreath9dCommentedLiterally the only frustration comes from the fact that at least half the scenes you're writing would come from one or two chapters in a standard novel, which wouldn't be a problem if it weren't exciting. This is a web novel, and you're diligently cranking out two chapters a day, which is huge. if it's that big a problem for me, I can shelve this one for a few days, or I can be patient and read it as it comes. The fact that I'm on the edge of my seat because of the excitement is not your problem, and the length of the chapters is decent for 40 cents a day. Stay the course.
Ps: If it's about the pacing, I really am trying to speed things up. But honestly I've come to realize that this is just how I write. I love adding details(that might seem useless to you) when I'm writing. And if it irks you, this poor author is sorry :(. Ill try my best to ramp up the pace. Btw, how's the pacing since the start of the summit?- Joshua_Galbreath1mthCommentedThe air parted with a sharp whoosh as Atticus left behind a trail of sonic booms, his form instantaneously appearing in front of Dell.
- Joshua_Galbreath1mthCommentedHe had finally found out the mastermind behind all of this attack on him, the Alverian family.
- Joshua_Galbreath1mthCommentedAnd just like that, on the second day, the battle that was supposed to involve only the first years immediately spiraled out into a full-blown war between the Ravenstein family and the Nebulon family in the academy.
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I know it's early in the novel, but there's no notice of him using this skill. .
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Okay now you gotta give me at least one dance battle, and it has to be unexpected. Perhaps the ninja joins in. Ghana v Nigeria v South Africa. I don't know... something.
LoudmouthWarrior: "I'm in! Let's do this, people! Prepare to witness the most epic dance battle in gaming history!" - Joshua_Galbreath8mthCommentedJason tried to rack his brain for some idea but only ended up with one answer. "That's how he met my mother?"
- Joshua_Galbreath8mthReplied to RegnarokJulian Caesar Vancouver
- Joshua_Galbreath8mthCommented'If this was a system novel, I can imagine the amount of people spamming 'weakling' in the comments.' Jason mused as he suddenly saw Zilan appearing in the arena, making him wonder whether the break was already over.
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He's self aware, considerate, and he's worked the info dump into the story. No complaints.
(AN: The info dump is coming... *sighs at the number of people skipping.) - Joshua_Galbreath8mthCommentedDraco sighed and ended his foes. While shaking his legs to the beat in the way Zaine taught him.
- Joshua_Galbreath8mthCommentedSystem play music: Number 1 - Bleach Anime Soundtrack!
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Way to work it in
Deployed nodded. "Please do." - Joshua_Galbreath8mthCommented
Lol almighty cursive, huh?
As for Draco, he was furious and sulking that his genius idea for the name was unanimously rejected. He input the name as Divine Umbra and the building trembled a bit as a name plaque appeared above the door which was written in almighty cursive. - Joshua_Galbreath1yrCommented
A lorry in Baltimore...
However, just as he reached the pedestrian crossing's middle, he heard a loud horn. Turning his head to the left, he saw a lorry speeding towards him. - Joshua_Galbreath1yrCommented
Isn't Agrianos upwards of 10 million years old?
'I didn't accept Lord Agrianos' words at face value because an Awakened Soul is something that should take years to unearth. But, it appears I was a fool. Wise beyond his years, Agrianos knows what his eyes had uncovered,' Scar thought. - Joshua_Galbreath1yrCommented
That's pretty susceptible...
Mag. Defense: 520 - Joshua_Galbreath1yrCommented- Character Wipe
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Trying to remember the name of that anime
My mother spoke with my father about their "adventure" around 10 years ago, how they defeated the "demon lord" and that they were now able to finally live in peace as simple farmers.