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So you should have made that clear in the chapter. Not in the comments. You wrote the chapter as if he was manipulating her. Not what you have said here. Anyway. No hate or anything, like the guy that responded to my comment implied, just pointing out certain illogical and nonsensical decisions. But you are writing one of the better cultivation stories out here, so good job.
Sisters? Or best friend and sisters? But just use sister, much more probable. No sister is calling themselves their own sister's "best friend" unless it is like a running joke or something.
So what about the group fight scene that Daniel fought so hard for?
But like, why? Just ask for more techniques. You have already accepted the task of reaching Perfection with a bunch of techniques to get the Martial Physique or whatever its called. So, just ask for more techniques. Why would you need to manipulate a friend/loved one for this? You are just making it needlessly complicated and stupid.
The dialogue seems kind of wordy. A better way to write would be "What the hell is wrong with the King?" We all know Richard is talking about our main character, it doesn't have to be spelled out every thing they talk about the king. This should also be implemented across other dialogue from other characters. It is just generally more natural and "correct sounding" to say "The King" instead of "King Arthur Jr." And if you still want to say his name, just drop the Jr. part. That was important when the Arthur Senior (AKA Arthur II or was it III?) was alive. It isn't needed now when he is dead.
Well, no. He has his own Realm. And then the Realm he achieves by sharing power with his disciples. So, everything should be temporary.
Not my novel, not the author. Just touching up the translated novel to make it readable. As to your question, probably he will lose access to the power. I mean, that only seems the most logical.
It looks like if he shares power, his shares everything, but that also goes away when not sharing power. So, it is probably a temporary/semi-permanent sharing of power that goes on with the system.
I assume that he would lose the ability to reapply the sharing of power. And if Lin Fan wasn't sharing power with his disciple and one of them died, I assume he would have no ability to share power any more.