First of all, I realise that harem is one of the tags and I can’t really complain since I knew that going into this. I just wanted to read something, and I thought there was a chance it could’ve been the one in a million novel where a harem is actually done well. It’s not. I’m quite annoyed actually, it had so much potential. I can deal with harems where the women are actual individuals and provide something to the story, and there’s only 2-3 of them. This was not the case here, they completely lack any sense of personality. They’re just there to add to the grandeur of the mc, displaying how women just fall to there knees around him. It completely ruins the story. As well as this, all the characters lack any sort of depth. The interactions fail to portray any deeper emotions than surface level, it seems almost mechanic. Finally, I hate how saint-like the mc is. It’s just completely unrealistic, given how much had been taken away from him you’d expect him to carry some resentment. He never gets angry, he’s constantly fixed in an emotional state of sunshine and rainbows and it’s frankly boring. I realise you can’t expect too much from Webnovel for quality but I genuinely had high hopes for this one.

How come it went from 2300->3700->5500->7500 ? Why is the difference in experience needed between levels not increasing at at least the same rate as lower levels? It went 1400->1800->2000, you’d expect 2200 or higher, no?

How does someone mess up on the first paragraph of their story? You’d think they’d take better care when they’re just starting

Roman goddess of luck

Movements*

Where are you from? Most third world countries are racist if not all

Definitely not, countries like India, Nigeria, Pakistan and Afghanistan are all extremely racist and some of the most racist countries on earth. Media likes to portray white people as the most racist due to the fact that they committed atrocities due to racism on a larger scale in the past since they were more technologically advanced. After all the UK was the first country to undergo its industrial revolution. The truth is Western Europe, especially to the north, is the least racist place in the world and has made the greatest strides in social reform.

This is a bit unrealistic, why is he so friendly with everyone? He has literally just been sold and been in unbearable agony

Sorry to rain on your parade bud, but when you are referring to multiple types of fish or booze the plural becomes fishes or boozes. We still use fish or booze as plural only if its the same type of fish or booze.

Why has the grammar suddenly devolved over the last few chapters?

Whats the point of pretending his cultivation is so low? Theres too many things that could go wrong

The word dead is unnecessary here

NOT without justification

Not as IF I care

With > worth

It’s very good but it’s not for me. It feels more like I’m watching the story progress instead of being immersed in it, this could change later in the story and I may come back to it at a later date but right now it’s not really engaging me. There’s no real connection to the main character. However, I would recommend that everyone gives it a try as it is written well and has a good premise although there is the occasional grammar mistake.

Isn’t it 7 continents? North America, South America, Europe, Asia, Africa, Oceania and Antarctica

Bruh

The system didnt ask for quantity just different types