looking forward to the next chapter

pretty good oc setting, entertainingly cliche characters and a funny mc ....................................................................................

first

it does sound good though

nevermind

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yoooooo first

another good lookism fanfic, has a little bit to work on writing wise but it's solid.............................................................................

it's been pretty good so far but I would recommend just reading the chapters before hand because it seems like you misspell or miss some words in sentences or explain something poorly and it make's it confusing to follow what's happening or who's talking or taking action.

maybe don't add increases to skill levels as rewards, make him train/fight for those skill levels

looks good

thanks for redoing this I've had this in my library for idk how long, nice to see it being updated

thanks

man I love to see characters I hate being tortured

thank you

ok

as he is now in dnd would he be able to learn new techniques and evolve limitless to do more space manipulation type stuff?

thanks for the chapter, also seeing that this was updated when I checked this morning made me hard

which surprisingly both seem to exist in fallout

in a previous chapter didn't taejin say that when he was in cheonliang the mc was around the age of gun and goo at the same time, so was he 12 or gun and goo's age 16 - 17