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MonochromeJoker1yrCommentedI mean the guy’s even using the crystals himself. I don’t doubt he’d make his cat use them too.
"Meow!" <You're really a bad person!>- MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
She’s a cat. That comes with animal senses, great balance and claws. All the animals nearby are becoming bigger or stronger. That means she has the possibility of being a jacked up beefy cat or at least a strong one with built in weapons AKA claws. A cats perfect for an assassin character too.
Tell her, how should she kill enemies with these abilities? - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
😂 And that’s how the story of two crossdressing female immortals started✨✨
Ke Xin was very satisfied, the corners of her lips lifting slightly. "Sister, I've finished reading that book these few days. I went to accept a mission early in the morning! You're right, I'm going to work harder in the future and Ascend by myself!" - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
Zygote wouldn’t be part of her vocabulary since she came from an ancient China cultivation world or at least I’m assuming that.
"What do you know about this adult stuff huh? You're just a little zygote, no need to be serious." Su Ci Yi then pinched the chubby cheeks of this child. Anyway, there's no advantage moping her destiny. Everything should move on. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*turn a blind eye to.
This was something that she could not turn into a blind eye. She was part of an outstanding sect for many years and turning a blind eye to corruption was a huge violation of their guiding principles. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*noticed by the human eye.
Su Ci Yi felt the tremendous aura of bad energies a moment ago. Upon sensing it though her qi, she immediately rushed out to the place where it came from. She had already surpassed the human level abilities therefore, there are various things that she could do without being noticed on the human eye. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*smuggle
Su Ci Yi went back on reading. Well, one might be curious that every time someone comes in, she's reading? Yes, she might get an addiction to it. Right now, Su Ci Yi was reading the "Heaven's Cultivation Manual", "Kung Fu Manual", "Secrets to easily pass Qi Cultivation Stage" Though it seems fake but the details and specifications on how to do cultivations are worth to remember. All the books that she requested from Su Ming where from the same author. She was on suspecting that this sister of hers had some kind of deals with this author. Even the latest edition that hadn't been on the market, she managed to snuggle it and gave it to her! - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*lining the walkway.
Su Ci Yi heard commotions from the outside. There where lots of luxurious car park and a number of bodyguards are lining. A man in tall built and devilish charm was at the center. His face was lithe in the dark aura and felt that any moment would explode. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*lots of luxurious cars parked
Su Ci Yi heard commotions from the outside. There where lots of luxurious car park and a number of bodyguards are lining. A man in tall built and devilish charm was at the center. His face was lithe in the dark aura and felt that any moment would explode. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*commotion Commotion is singular and plural, so you don’t need to add an “s”
Su Ci Yi heard commotions from the outside. There where lots of luxurious car park and a number of bodyguards are lining. A man in tall built and devilish charm was at the center. His face was lithe in the dark aura and felt that any moment would explode. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*sharpened one’s senses. *in that limited range only.
One of the benefits of cultivating was that it sharpened once senses. However, her hearing was only limited five kilometers from her position. All things which she could hear were on that limited range only. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
This sounds a bit awakward. Maybe “actively listen to her surroundings”?
Su Ci Yi closed her eyes and begun to activate her active hearing. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*Let’s take this battle to the end this time
"Come at me with all you're might. Let's take this battle end this time!" - MonochromeJoker1yrReplied to Riya_San
You’d probably like Lady Lin’s First Ever Journey To Immortality
Leng Ruoxue first read 'Ling Feng Record' and knew that this continent was called Ling Feng Continent. There were not only humans but also a wide range of spiritual beasts on the continent. And the current country she was in was the Eastern Lagoon Empire, one of the five most powerful countries on the Ling Feng Continent. The Five Great Countries and the Five Great Families were the top powers in this world. The people in this world admired the strong, and only the strong would be respected by others. Even those who had good pedigrees but were weak would be cast aside. The foolish Leng Ruoxue was the best example. She had a noble background, but because she was a fool, even ordinary civilians in the Eastern Lagoon Empire looked down on her. Leng Ruoxue was happy with her current predicament. She did not want to continue being someone who was bullied and scolded like rubbish. She was going to be a powerhouse who rose above the nine heavens! She would not be at the mercy of anyone! - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
Why didn’t she ask how saving her life might affect the system? He just clearly stated that changing her destiny has repercussions and bringing her soul back damaged him back then too. I’m beginning to feel like she’s not all that smart😅
When Jayde tried to find out more about the training requirements, Isha informed Jayde that this was something she would need to figure out on her own. The Proteus artifact was created to help contractors on their chosen path, it was not allowed to influence a contractors destiny, and even something as insignificant as telling a contractor which training was available could influence their decisions. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
I’m confused. Wasn’t she already a Centurion? Didn’t she have to go through a lot of torture already to become the head of a rebellion? Plus, she was just betrayed too, so I’m wondering how she could come off as anything nice and fluffy instead of a porcupine.
Her training through the Xi Corporation had honed her into a blade, this 'assessment' had hammered away the brittleness, whittling away her weaknesses, forging her into the sharpest blade on Doha. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*tacit agreement
The sunlight reflecting off of her chestnut brown hair gave her a nearly ethereal aura to those around her. The noble look alone caused the crowd to have a tactic agreement not to interrupt the peaceful image. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
That’s way too fast. She just immediately accepted that she’s her own Mom and not Rory Hayne’s Mom.
"It's fine. I forgive you for everything." Rory hugged her mother until her mom stopped crying. - MonochromeJoker1yrCommented
*The wind roared
Winds roared in Victoria Hill's ears as she stared off into the dim horizon. - MonochromeJoker1yrReplied to Rhiana_Simpson
There’s a lot like “The Genius Doctor, My Wife, Is Valiant” , “Transmigrated as the Domesticated Rabbit of the Sick and Frail Villain in the Apocalypse” or even “After I Stole The Male Lead, The Female Lead Cried”.
Her mom look at the box and a warm smile beamed from her face. "Ah... That! Xiao-lei bought it personally for you. That boy, I'm telling you, although, he look cold and expressionless, he actually has a soft fragile heart. He asks for your measurement starting from 6 months ago, I think he prepares to give your clothes even before that "