Zakaria_Hassn

You over explain what the character are doing let them talk about one thing just don’t over explain everything.

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

You write to much man finds the book especially when it they came back it would be easier to leave up

The first the 2000 chapters was good and unbelievably stroy but now the book is just rubbish I don’t what the writer is telling anymore