No, just some things that have delayed me.

Never in my life have I felt so pathetic yet so thankful.

I had typed this last night at 4 AM. Thank you for telling me! I honestly feel like a clown.

Thank you for the feedback!

Oh no, it isn't like that. I actually have a good reason o kill him early and bring him back. It'll explain as he progresses through his journey. I don't like starting off with strong MCs in Cultivation novels. Really what I want to do is make people assume and then try and at least switch it to where they're like ‘Oh I didn't expect that!’ Right now will be the Purpose Arc and you'll see why it's called that. If that makes any sense. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts though, it makes me glad that people are willing to let me know so I can help them enjoy the story more without messing up the plot or pacing.

Wut? I don't do it like that. And the science thing was a small piece for characterizing his traits. Though I know what you mean by people always powering up the protagonist. Thanks for at least letting me know what to avoid man.

Who knows :)