AFoolishFoxKit

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

It was at this point that I thought “can I please, please, please go through and proofread this?” because I am having a bit of difficulty reading it. I love the concept and I love the story but the grammar and word-usage is hurting my head… if I were any less stubborn or less enamored by the story, I would’ve already stopped reading it.