so 65 chapters left.....yeah?....
fear of the unknown
honestly can't comment as i have to wait for the releases of the rest but I belive that it served its purpose
no pic, thanks for chap
no pic, thanks for chap
no pic, thanxs for chap
......you just holidayed many things that could outline the future quins nature so im going to put down a theory, the future quin mentioned a single time stream among many that alongside how this story is set out we can then assume that this story does infact use the multiverse theory as a basis, and therfore my theory is that the future quin was one of which he did not defeat or overcome his pride and instead attempted to harness it in his hubris for power intern makeing him pridful by his main nature which again intern explains the peculiarities in the interaction between the to an the idea that he can "make everything better" by changing the past without thinking of the consequences. there are 3 supporting factors to this theory.1) we know the multivers must exist due to the nature of the story such as lily and James being alive, ivy existing and so on. 2) we know for a fact that the future quin was still obsessed with the vault as he was adamant for quin to return after defeating the curse again as well as future quins entire interactions with current quin being overly prideful for example believing that he needed next to no protection on his experimentation room as his houses wards where already "impenetrable". 3) quins base personality was completly different which can only occur due to mental minipulation or trauma (a base personality is normaly defined withing the first 10 to 15 years of life depending on circumstances and experience and will mostly dictate a person's main morals such as how people should be treated how empathetic someone can be and how they see the world) of which his soul being corrupted would come under as it holds (shown through remembering his past lifes memorys) key personality traits and memorys
as i previously mentioned its not the sin vault in itself thats bad but the side storys that just make no sense in the wider context of this fanfic. 1) quin is known to try limit inefficiency and enjoys his freedom so getting rid of the toad (umbrage) should have been a main priority. 2) quin is known to hate manipulating the innocent and has a dislike for being controlled of which future quin does both of. 3)quin dosnt want his family being harmed by his actions yet still went back into the sin vault with next to no idea of how to remove it in which is a contradiction. its just things that make no sense for quin to do based on his personality that reduce emersion in the story and therfore make people that genuinely care for and enjoy the story annoyed. I enjoy this story and belive in total it is a great thought out and emersive story, but its just these contradictions that hold it back now and again.
honestly i think the sin vault in itself aint a bad idea, a way to challenge quin from within and make the entire trop of "defeat your demons" intersting, whilst also giving a plausable explanation to learning soul magic gradually. its the way that a few arcs have been handled and the focus on some elements that really dont fit the story that just make it feel jarring. for example in an earlier arc many people where complaining on the focuse of umbritch and that she shouldn't have been such a main staying point, I agree, by the time that the author got rid of her any fulfilling moment of her getting what she deserved and even the trial itself felt hollow and just trying to expand the chapter number.
this.....ive stood up for a lot of iffy decisions in the past.... but this is just completly wrong it conflicts against EVERYTHING we know about quin, from the removal of choice in the time travel, to the complete and utter manipulation of an innocent party (even if that is himself) it just feels wrong and out of place for his character
you butiful bastard ..... that ladies and gentlemen is what we call a smooth transition
*shitty David attenborough impression* and now the author must hibernate for a day before creating another chapter and will shedding it onto webnovle by the end of the week
.....that was the litaral point of his introduction well done for stating what has already been said 👍 👏 👏 👏