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Saiya_Sheep

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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep25d
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    Skin white as snow? That doesn't sound very healthy at all. Blood deficiency? 🤔

    He had long inky black hair that swayed in the gentle wind. His skin was as white as snow, not a single scar or blemish visible.
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    Re: Evolution Online
    Fantasy · Yolohy
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Author kinda dissing himself here 🤣

    'Is that idiot the incarnation of idiocy and clichès?'
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
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    Why do we get multiple paragraphs of internal monologuing instead of him simply...asking? This is so frustrating.

    'So the Will restrains her…and what is that about Battle Maid? Well, she never looked like an ordinary maid before, but I expected her to be royalty of the Silverfang Tigerfolk, and not a Battle Maid. What even is a Battle Maid?'
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Yes, we get it.... why does the author keep repeating information all the time..

    'I need to do something. If I leave the fate of my territory hanging like this, it's only a matter of time before my journey ends miserably before it even started!'
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
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    Lol. He called it a "treasure trove" not a minute ago. Already downgrading it to "acceptable" 🤪

    'An ordinary Summoning Gate, a Wooden Manor for the Lord, a Maid, the Protection Barrier, and a humongous, densely packed rainforest that surrounds the clearing. Looks like my territory is in an acceptable position, and I'm not missing anything. Nice!'
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Looks like the author is confusing presence with appearance.

    Tiara might be his maid but it was still a little confusing that she had such a noble presence. The first thought he had when he saw her was that she belonged to royalty. She was very beautiful, with long eyelashes, fair skin, and long, silky hair.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Second sentence is weird. "alive rather than..." should be followed by whatever it is not meant to be... "alive rather than dead" for example. "Alive rather than the surrounding" makes no sense.

    A faint gust brushed past his face, and sunlight shone through the canopy of towering trees around him. It was warm and humid, furthermore, everything seemed alive rather than the surrounding filled with towering skyscrapers.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    So much for his flames...I mean sparks...

    After Boss Liu left, Zhou Chen did not immediately start planning on how to develop the dojo. Instead, he began his personal training, such as punching the sandbag and practicing spear arts.
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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Or just...you know....cook/eat at home? 🤦‍♂️

    He could actually eat more, but that would look abnormal, so he chose to restrain himself.
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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
    Commented

    Well, you killed two of them yourself...friggin' hypocrite.

    Zhou Chen felt that the chance of death in this Survival mission was too high. No wonder so many people were reported missing in the news.
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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep1mth
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    You just murdered someone for no real reason (he could have simply walked away from the man with the broken leg)...but stealing water in a desert is beneath you? Liar.

    Zhou Chen was a little speechless. Although he was still a little thirsty, he would not go so far as to steal other people's water.
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    Infinite Survival: I Can Plunder Passive Skills
    Sci-fi · 8k Dollar
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep8mth
    Commented

    Sooo...is this the Digestor variant of the Shadow Guide? I'm not quite sure what's going on.

    When he reopened his eyes, they contained bottomless swirls of black and white lights that guided his path. In an unearthly trance, he confidently strode toward the door, as if he knew where he was heading.
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    Didn't he just say a chapter back that Zephyrim's are considered unkillable? And that in light of recent events that changed. So now saying "there are many Digestors capable of killing" seems....weird.

    "He's not lying," Cekt confirmed with a nod. "Where we're going, the primary Digestors you'll encounter are Cosmic, Space, and Void Digestors. Among these three categories, there are many Digestors capable of killing even a Zephyrim. They may not physically harm you, but they can devour your vital energy in an instant."
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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    😂

    "Cough... Jake has passed the test. From now on, he joins Epsilom as my second official disciple of this generation."
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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    Didn't he teleport like 18 billion kilometers previously while still in the Ordeal?

    Nevertheless, this was still a colossal problem. Jake hadn't tested the extent of his teleportation abilities, relying only on his Energy Body and the Aetherdream, but he seriously doubted he could traverse even a thousandth of B842 in a single leap.
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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    "narrowed his eyes"? I thought Oros has no eyes and neither a face?

    The Oracle Overseer narrowed his eyes at this cunning question. "You can, but I strongly advise against visiting the Mirror World attached to other Mirror Universes. Besides the cost, if you travel too far, you risk not being able to return..."
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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    *within the Mirror World

    "The first point to remember is that, unlike the conventional Oracle System, communications and long-distance travel within the Mirror Universe will not cost you much. Of course, 'not much' is a relative term. At least within the Mirror Universe, the cost can be considered negligible compared to what it would cost you to call someone residing in another System.
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    The Oracle Paths
    Sci-fi · Arkinslize
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    *This Mirror World

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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    Rule 2 seems to work out swimmingly for the rest of the Universe, huh? Useless rule.

    "The second rule is evident, yet I shall reiterate it: you must pledge unwavering loyalty to the Mirror Universe. The third rule is that to maintain your noble title and aspire to higher ranks, you must also accomplish a certain number of objectives.
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    The Oracle Paths
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  • Saiya_Sheep
    Saiya_Sheep9mth
    Commented

    🤣🤣

    Now, Jake was an entirely different breed. Most importantly, he had an entire faction behind him. If he couldn't enjoy a peaceful day, then neither could the other faction members.
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    The Oracle Paths
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