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Story is well written and was a great read up the the current release. A pretty lighthearted story and I had a blast just enjoying the progression. Definitely a k-drama story line in ways hahaha

diabetes overload with the sweetness. got a grown man trying not to giggle hahaha

this is great 👍

Just recently got into the Warhammer universe and this, this story right here is not helping!!!! Its super addicting to read and I'm like a crack head waiting for more chapters 😆

It's a good idea, but it's almost unreadable. No backround info, paragraphs feel jumbled up, and there is no scene breaks meaning you don't know when the story jumps around to different povs.

wow is all I can say, never watched the show so I cant say much about that. but this story is written very well and I found myself emotional reading through it. Great job author and keep it up

This is really good so far, nice development and it's nice having another mandolorian story out that looks well done so far

spending a ton of time in this arc, and it feels almost like word vomit over and over going into the training and explanations of other characters, but there's almost no substance. I get there has to be character development but it's a little much, I feel like I've read the same chapter for the last 6 updates

So far this is actually really good. The backround and development are great, Grammer I'd good and I found I couldn't stop reading until I read all the chapters in one sitting. This has the potential to be one of the more solid naruto fanfics I've seen on here if the author keeps this up. good work 👍

all I can say is.... CAN I PET THAT DAWG, lol this is pretty good so far.