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Justthatdude_GG053 years ago
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This is the second book by this author and by far the best one, I can tell they have gotten better at writing and that they put more effort into the book. The grammar and story is just way better overall.
Paradiso
Fantasy · CalmDaoistLee
Justthatdude_GG053 years ago
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Damn
"I will rip out your organs and hang you with them if you don't stop running your mouth." Cain's crisp voice broke out. The room was silent as both Sara and Noel looked at the boy in front of them with wide eyes.
Paradiso
Fantasy · CalmDaoistLee
Justthatdude_GG053 years ago
Commented
Damn imagine being that useless
The weight of the creature flung up the rancid smell of rotten corpses and organs. "Ah fuck! Stupid piece of shit, why can't you die normal, even in death these fuckers cause issues."
Paradiso
Fantasy · CalmDaoistLee
Justthatdude_GG053 years ago
Posted
So far so good, the story is decent and the characters are well thought out. I am looking forward to more chaps. The only thing I think could be done better is phrasing and a few spelling errors could be fixed. And maybe the best part but no system is in it...yet let's hope it stays that way!
The Heart Of Dominance (OLD)
Action · CalmDaoistLee