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FranzJuniver3yrCommenteddis rhyme... REALLY?!
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Yes, yes she did lol. She has to because olden times require a ready succewwor for the throne
The Queen Escaped with the whole family, and a Guest Principal Advisor. Included in this Escape was Prince Yosef, Crown Prince Lodayr, Prince Kanan and the Infant Prince Korol. The daughters include Princess Felina, Princess Kaja, Princess Judiah, Princess Camilla and Princess Nuyrah. All of them are accompanied by the Guest Principal Advisor named Haroldus. With them are guards armed with Grenavian Rifles and a coach driver. - FranzJuniver3yrReplied to isharislynkia
Yes, yes I am
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Some constructive points. 1. I love the way you write. I have no opposition to it. Although the onomatopoeia can be managed, it's better and understandable as a layman's term. 2. I love how the story develops, but I like a quick-paced one. Not too quick though, as it may leave plot holes. 3. I notice the side stories, and side cliches and touches, I love how you describe the normality or how you describe the environment the character is in. 4. Build a better world for the novel. You decide how it be better. TBH I like the era the novel went through, and more TBHs, I did not like the theme or the focus of the novel, but this is one of those novels that caught my interest despite not being inside my scope of interest. Keep it up, and make the story better! In a bigger picture though I cannot judge as I have only read a quarter of chapters, but I'm liking it frankly.
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This is what I mean by subtlety of expression, and the description of feels.
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Just buy a new one next time.
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PISHBOL, How I miss eating some if everything was to open!
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A typical replacement for the real swear word LOL
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they will be useless soon HAHAHAHA
The Queen Escaped with the whole family, and a Guest Principal Advisor. Included in this Escape was Prince Yosef, Crown Prince Lodayr, Prince Kanan and the Infant Prince Korol. The daughters include Princess Felina, Princess Kaja, Princess Judiah, Princess Camilla and Princess Nuyrah. All of them are accompanied by the Guest Principal Advisor named Haroldus. With them are guards armed with Grenavian Rifles and a coach driver. - FranzJuniver3yrCommented
you like 800 do you?
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- FranzJuniver3yrReplied to Anotoki
Yrp. yep it is.
He is a well-versed and well-learned person of ways in even bizarre situations: He read the Art of War, and books on the Theory of Relativity. His curiosity once actually made him invent a couple of things to try out on his own. He once invented a working engine. However, it was nowhere to be seen, but once he is satisfied with the result, he does not care of wherever that thing went. - FranzJuniver3yrReplied to TRUDE_Nguyen
Will make changes, LOL
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On, if "in" was used, it will be inside the table, but food of course is on top of the table.
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