Vanhelm

..... Why do I feel that the other lady might not actually be poisoning him intentionally? except for the gluttony pill at the beginning. it could be her elder preparing all this

they are absolutely brothers

and this is where the story falls completely. slave seals are complete bullshit especially if they mind control the target completely. there's no sense of suspense if all the MC has to do is enslave others with a 100% guarantee. I dropped a novel that was decent in the beginning, because it devolved into using slave seals like this al the time

wasn't as good as the love counseling one

exactly how much of DanMachi's story does he know? because you are going back and forth on him knowing and not knowing things.

... this is beginning to look like it was written by a 14yo or younger

... is this supposed to be a fully grown man? why is he stupider than Goku and more arrogant than Vegeta?

.... why is Fleur the first in over 90% of the hpr18 fictions?

what he didn't do any gardening?