Omniscient_Valor

The story is really captivating. Gammer though does need some work but other than that the story has points that capture your interest and I hope to see this story completed.

This is my sign to drink and gamble people. [Somas Winemaking] |Epic Skill| Danm achi - You are as great at making wine and other alcoholic products as the god Soma. But you still need experimentation to figure out the wines you can make with the resources. Even god does not succeed every time.

Patients really do act like this, but the nurse should have told the patient immediately on there situation when asked. Since patients have there own rights. This is the only thing that has me aggravated because a nurse or any medical professional should not act like this, especially telling a patient to take a break that's essential down playing there feelings of confusion.

Overall for a start the story is pretty good.

Is this the undying reptile, because if it is, it can't die. Or in your story, it can? Genuine question.

These demons/evil spirits about to catch some holy hands.