Arthur about to end this whole man's career!

how about just don't have a "waifu" you do realize that that's not they only thing a female character can contribute?(great work btw)

MMMMMMM QAULITY I SEE ADD TO LIBARY I WILL.

what is that bag made of? putting that dragon in a bag is the equivalent of putting a box of razorblades in thier.

he is crippled and? they may write whatever they wish.i just hope that this a challenge to overcome and not a minor setback

three things aren't babies born bald? (I coullda sworn they were) second if there is a God in this world do NOT put Astrid and mc together for sooooooo many bloody reasons and third nice novel seeing lots of potential (:

YOU DONE GOOFED JIM!

poi

my dude you write like a traumatized war child that has a stick up his ass.i couldn't even read the first chapter.please get help ....................................................................... .....,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,78;^8^&;;;%8::[""[^>^>:0$5[' c6c9xoxzorzg fk,lt,ltzorz9rxotztozpxycpc9txxoxotxotxoztz9txpyxpy pt 9tc9tct0cp6c60xt9x9tx95do5zx9xoxxottxotcptxptxltchvivbinong6x5xvivyxuvivjsjysksjtcpycpyxotxozxlxyozotzoxlyxlyzlxphxyxuxuc8civvivicicucucu ucuci iiv8v8v8v

oh you sneaky muther fucer i could kiss you

it was just the wind? also where pidgey the pigeon during this? although it is batman.....

this is cheap throw the book is ending so your trying to milk people out of thier money? really? thats low.

you do amazing work but life comes first take your time.

did everybody just forget about welfare and thaile? like ottars good but.... one is the greatest Smith off all time with a week of free time and the other is basically female Kratos with a spear and a huge body count. I think Freya's underestimating them or has a plan although how you plan for a nigh infinite amount of weapons and materials from the low low floors oh and thaile who is just a godammned battering ram I don't see how you plan for that.

........she's gonna try to kill the angel isn't she?

take all the time in the world from one sick person to another chill Medicine and lots of water if you have a water bottle with a straw now is the time to use it (:

thanks for the chapter's rest well

good chapter note perhaps chose a theme for her constructs for example hal Jordan used mechanical shapes because he was a pilot someone else [forgot] name use shapes because he was a architect etc etc

he could probably defeat mcu thanos probably but comic Thanos yeah yeah no sorry that "thing" is a one man army on steroids spiced with nonsense that would make superman blush and armed with the skittles of doom. he'll even without that comic Thanos has a slew of scientific, magic, abilities and the durability to take a black hole. oh unless your squirl girl in that case you win.......somehow [actually canon ]

is... is that blackstar from soul eater........... cool...... oh also the novels great 👍 👌 😀 😄 👏 👍 👌 😀 😄 👏 👍 👌 😀😀😀😃😃😄🙂