_Requiem_
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what did Rimuru forget?
they will all be of kage level, Jiraiya will be stronger than Orochimaru in hermit mode, but he will not be able to capture or kill.
Brux... no lesbi...
I didn’t leave comments for a long time, but I really liked this fic, although the dialogues still need to be worked on, but in general I liked this fanfic format more than the main character with hundreds of beautiful girls with yuri elements. Looking forward to more chapters.
(I do not speak English, this is a translation.)The DxD harem is important, but try to make gg dominate the girls and not be a laughing stock. In novels, I do not like Yuri, because for me Yuri is in a novel where the main character is a man rather strange and shows his inability to look after his harem. I only write this because of Valerie's tastes, because harems are different.
So-so, Yuri is good, but here Kayeda, imprisoned in a woman's body, is out of place, you can tell almost immediately, as she appeared in Naruto's world. It would be nice if she had a boyfriend and not a girlfriend, Hinata is in love with Naruto, this cannot be changed. You have to break her so that she stops looking at Naruto.