legendary start

Just going to say that's the most predictable chapter ever and He's justice stupid The Strongest Justice is stupid glad he didn't kneel but he going to be deserted from the Marines author just make him a pirate hunter.

Just keep him as a bounty hunter unless you don't know how to write a story because If he joins Luffy's crew he probably going be a beta mc plus good work on the card system but don't rush the skills he gets hope it's not a harem.

Tbh it could be a tie between Allen and Chorollo.

Hope he doesn't use a cape also makes sure his blood disappears or they can't get into his skin plus hope the mc doesn't follow superman's custom design. You should also have a decline option on the task so he won't be forced to accept a task or take off the task option so he can do own his thing.

At First, I thought the character was dumb because he didn't know math could be used for all things then I kept reading this is where the character development starts happening first he wants a little bit stupid then he was didn't know businesses management well but the later chapters he starts learning business and more I was shocked also the battle of countries is quite funny and the math concepts and technology got me hooked because some of these concepts are real. The characters are not bland and boring at all and the joke of the series is how he still single. He's a good character sometimes you can't tell he dense or not the system is good. Read the story it's good.

Not really

Smh using the power of friendship again.

👏Nice author for using real logic where he can't remember all the content of the book plus he seems hardworking or witty so Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff also you're building up the relationships of the characters I like that and the pace is nice also you're writing getting better.

Still the best.

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

👏The portrait is gone finally but It was well used to the end because it taught some lessons for OZ character development. Can't wait to see him develop more and the people around him as they get stronger than cannon. I wonder If ron becomes a death eater😂.

Zac should learn martial arts in the meantime js.

Mhmm, He going to be powerful but hope he doesn't learn the mind arts too early.

Smart

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Try to make fairy tail without the power of friendship.

The MC is playing a dangerous game of chess with the headmaster😂battle of wit's I see. It is going funny how he going to lock the portrait up while Slytherin laughing or smiling at him.

no harem story.

Is he pure blood or muggle blood or born by magic or the force like Anakin Skywalker?