when talking about a man, handsome is more appropriate than beautiful which is mostly used for women. can you say that woman is handsome?

author Joy is 4 years old, its Lin's pregnancy that got her married so why are we going back to 3years when she's been married for 4 years please correct that

developed his business at the age of 3 years old?

are you looking for an editor by any chance, you book is great but your English is broken, in short not good

there are two words "Drunken Cloud" not three

please change the age that Wu Xiyu died, the memory that Rushuang have doesn't suit a 4 year old maybe you should put the age for a kid who understand mistreatment

I think maybe you should change the age at which Third Muss was when her mother died, a 4 year old doesn't even understand what death is, so how could she chose her mother's burial place?

I think maybe you should change the age at which Third Muss was when her mother died, a 4 year old doesn't even understand what death is, so how could she chose her mother's burial place?

think our author doesn't put our requests into considerations, the chapters are too short and keeps producing one chapter, we're heading to 10 chapters related to shooting for the magazine, so do you just enjoy utilizing our coins and give us peanuts?

Meng is the type who are over confident that their charm will always work when they scheme, I'm so looking forward to her downfall more that his cheater partner.

author I'd really love to support you but your pulling down my moral, what is the need or Being and Heating being married if your story keeps telling us how she thinks her husband is a driver and more so she doesn't even make an effort. every person dying loves to make last memories to be cherished while she's gone but your FL is money hungry with is not a good portray at all. maybe I'll consider coming back when you've decided to moved ahead to something else like I guessed 5 chapters and we're still on the shooting part if your out of ideas finalize the book and do some thing else. don't feel offended but I giving you genuine ideas, the longer you drag the story the more boring it becomes

can you please expose Heting's identity so that our FL could slap those two families that think the can manipulate everyone because of that useless woman, as much as she thinks she has was Bei has, it's time she knows she's wrong, she only gets leftovers. or you'll keep us till chapter 500?

seriously author do you really want us to keep supporting you, two chapters down but we're still talking about shooting for the magazine, you don't give us the spirit to continue supporting you, or you want to drain us dry. to make us abandon you along the way, as a sign of good faith improve your writing, then your chapters seem to be a quarter of a normal standard page honestly, give us what is equal to our coins we're spending.

Heating was tall not fat, so height can't occupy half of the space in the kitchen, you could use terms like his aura was suffocating for the Nanny that made the kitchen feel small for the three of them.

I think Bei is being unfair to Mr. Lu, even if she thinks she's dying, too many secrets, how can a child control a mother, even after she came back she's never bothered to know about Mr. Lu and keeps saying she's making enough money for them, she barely know the father of her son apart from being a driver illusion she has, which driver would get attention of lawyers in a powerful company, and use them all the time, which driver travels overseas. Su Bei is the one who ruined Mr. Lu life 5 years ago, she's back and still doing it, who buys a car worthy millions for five hundred thousands, he has been helping her in everything but never stopped to think of the kind of man his is, please author stop beating around the bush Bei character is a strong one so stop making her look insensitive and naive.

author I've been patiently waiting for your update but your story is starting to sound boring, how can someone be sick have a year to live but her sickness doesn't progress neither does she go to a doctor, can you at least make your book interesting even if you plan on beating around the bush

when you use the phone went off, it means its been switched off, as in it can't be reached, phone ringing sounds better and proper

your chapters are great but can you at least release more chapters,since you're talking about the contract part for both su why not just around it up for your readers so they could enjoy their reading instead of a chapter, its like feeding an adult in portions and that loses its taste along the way.

your book is interesting, could you please release more chapter what you've released contradicts the total number of chapters , starting another books means to discontinue yours

your book was going well. Why would Li Jing, sleep and wake up forgetting she was sleeping on too Cheng and start questioning, its Cheng who should be wondering where he was. your book is great hope you won't go down that road going back and fourth or exeggarate like other authors