Alot of the words are getting mushed together.

Do you mesn you walked to your room

The thing I don agree with is the pay wall becsuse the world may be somewhat concept but the games his charac make aren’t. Therefore I believe for there to be an actual paywall then it should be complety orginal, games and all.

Need to space out some words, some of them are merged together.

Such a way with words you have. A being that goes down the path of darkness but differently.

Thanks for the chapter

That actually seems like a good game idea.

The first chapter confused me and this is before me reading the rest. you should pick a gender and stick with it because it get's very confusing. You keep changing the word he and she so it was very confusing.

Read a little a bit and it reminds me of Building The Ultimate Fantasy for some reason. So I wanted to know fi this was going to be similar.

Just wanted to say thanks to Scott47 for putting in all of the pics to help jog my memory of these characters.

+1

I think we already read this. I will be waiting when a new chapter comes out.

I will have to disagree with you, my fellow star wars fan. I'll say it's not entirely impossible to have balance in the force. It may be just more of a struggle between two sides. The two sides the light and the Darkside constantly clash with one another.

Option Two

Not going to lie but now I'm less intrested in this fan fic because of the fact that he is human. and from reading the comments for the human vote they want him to be a anti hero and make an org. that defeats the purpose of the ceph. I will start reading once he fully matures since the first five chapters he is going to be young. Until then peace.

Shev palpatine and Darth sidious are the same person by the way. Also are you having his powers from legend or canon?

Continue

1

If your trying to spell knights then your spelling it wrong.

Shouldn't that be Greet not greed?