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This is a good story, but there’s one issue: the point of view changes too often between chapters. The constant switching of POVs can be confusing for readers, especially since the focus doesn’t stay on a single character. I hope the author eventually settles into a more consistent POV, or at least finishes one arc before switching, because the timeline feels a bit disjointed as it is.
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Wow is he an idiot he can change his appearance whatever he want but he didn't hahahaha
Is this hitman or talkative mc
Sorry for my nonsense comment but that of naive child soul how can affect him that transmitted to the otherworld with system
This is MC is so talkative and started to dub he is true hitman
Are you serious he is a hit man but no maturity and personality of a hitman
He is assasin but not to much cold blooded