its good but have you abandoned this novel it feels like a year since I came here last

are the gods just going to be creation and destruction and nothing different.............................................................................

this is where i stop reading

dunno why but I get the fill of twilight reading this /////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

it's not good or trash it's just okay but making him the son of fate dunno why I just find it stupid and cringe...........................................

wish little jack was the mc..............................................................................................................................

if i could i would change the review

am i the only one who hates seeing fireball in cultivation novel////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

do you still write this its been 7 months since the last update ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

read up to 10 chapters the only thing that annoys me the most is the word mana in martial arts novel hopefully, i won't see the word fireball next

the more i read it the more i realised it riped of another novel but changed it to wine from food

i am a little b1tch because all the small stuff annoys the sh1t out of me like trying to merge Chinese and western culture together.......................

lol you say genius but why dose he not make a bout and travel to the kingdom across the sea they don't believe there is one 2 birds with 1 stone they will not find them and she could rebuild her strength in secret

2 stars out of 5 at the moment he just got his stuff and cultivated for a couple of days and already beat the people who have cultivated for years and he saves her and she like falls for him its to stupid

so the power you treat it the same as magic and named it mana core but why do you call it gallant force is it it a mix of ,mana and spirit energy from Chinese novels

lol my spelling bad

if your like me who hates people putting like fire ball and magic spells in Chinese martial arts novels this aint for you just started and he got no real practice and he becomes strong he i know her found some stuff but come on her had no practice and he knows how to control it

and it said in the first chapter he was not a time traveller but you keep saying he is can you just tell us if he is or is not

what happened to the girl the pedo took

lol i am a newb i just wrote this so someone can take the orphanage idea and make a better one like when he reaches a certain level you can get the system to level it up the building itself because it would be a light hearted novel idea