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hii author the story plot is awesome and I'm quite enjoying it .there are some Grammer mistakes which can be rectified. I just have a small request ,that is try writing the whole chapter in any one lead's POV because I feel like reading same thing again if it is written in many people POV and I do think it will be best if you written it in third person POV bcoz it clarifies both the person's thought or reaction in a situation and as for Grammer I think I can help you if you want.have a nice day .stay safe .