renato_varela

Me three

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Not disappointed, I think the main concern is wether or not Kazir and Angelina actually work as anything else than boyfriend and girlfriend. Sure, they could haven been a Hollywood “on and off”, but i trust you have a change in dynamics planned . Cool story man.

If it is hard to imagine, just do it. Strike (punch, click, tap, whatever) once every 3 seconds; within 15 seconds you strike 6 times. This happens due to the “timer” starting at the first strike, and ending with the last.

Leonard was given too high a score (show purposes?), anything over 160 gives that “built different” sort of aura in most people perception.

Plausibility is also a factor. Having someone like Gwen Stacey (daughter of NYPD´s captain, Yelena king´s BFF, most recent victim of green goblin, etc) walking in a few days would be…sus; to say the least. Also, at this point Wakanda is still closed to the rest of the world, they need to remain low key.

Not harem?! ....I can’t believe it....my faith and hope in humanity have slightly increased. Nice work author.

I was getting used to the idea of Gaara being unalived. But i reckon the interim before shipudden ought to be fun... i do hope it wont be to big a “timeskip”, with shukaku being dead and all that

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Franky is older than robin, a fair bit older