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Isn’t this like…outrageously tall for a Japanese middle schooler?

Ignore the trolls, and this time ignore the supporters. Take care of yourself first and foremost author. Books can be rewritten, continuity can be revised, but we only have one you. Whatever happens don’t feel obligated to please anybody but you.

“Nobody likes to play support, yet everybody loves to win” Author you do you. Don’t mind the trolls. Anyone who grew up reading Batman and robin comics knows their everyday life (violence involved or not) is as crucial as the superhero aspect, maybe even more.

Still early, but the idea and vision are deserving of 5 stars. MC seems likable enough as well. As long as you portray the personality and shenanigans of the bat family, this will be gold.

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Just in case, Talia hated the whole thing. Also, you do you Author, story is amazing.

Pretty sure Bane is his own boss, but if you go by the young justice universe, he is more like an occasional collaborator. BUT, in the DC universe, at some point Bane managed to earn the approval of Ra’s al-Ghul to marry Talia, so beating him would automatically gain Ra’s attention. You could also have Kieran clash with Luthor

Take your time king, good to know you are alive.

Chillax dude, the story is gold, we can wait.

Still early, but…. we have a no-nonsense MC; a system easy to use and understand: plenty of xianxia concepts and ambience without repetitive scenarios nor idiotic commentaries by NPCs…..it’s shaping up to be a great story. Nicely done author.