Me gusta leer mucho, y aqui estoy, queriendo escribir, pero el mundo anda en mi contra. (malvado Samsung)
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Actually this Is cinema
it's a Chingchong One?
nani the f???
impeldown Is not that high....
Didn't he just got money from the hyuga???? like 5 paragraphs ago?
Did we skip a chapter?
I'm just a comentar. its your fanfic dude, don't Let my hate dictate how you do yours. I like fanfics that put More on the POV of the protagonist. Now you put the system that changes some stuff and put Random chars. and that makes some Sense, but in my particular case I don't quite like to read the same as in canon. If There Is stuff that could be changed without much consequence.
Thats It... the fanfic has a great idea but It turns out the Author cant think of something nice to do. just following everything Is a bad choice... we don't need to watch the thing we know...
why???? he isnt even injured