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When will we get another chapter? This is the first story with a transmigrated Harry Potter that I've enjoyed.
Does the curse associated with these items still persist?
Is it the curse of the sword and compass? How does that work?
Based on how it's being built, I think he'll end up with both.
I agree, just hand over the MC's powers and that's it. If you're going to tell the story of how he died, tell it after he arrives in the new world.
I don't know where the author saw this, but in the story it was explained that not even Gojo can hit a Black Flash whenever he wants; Itadori is the one with a special body that increases his chances of hitting the Black Flash.
Okay, so the MC's abilities seem to have come from outside the world of Fate. Can the MC develop more abilities as he grows in fame and prestige? Like the heroes of Fate, something like the Golden Rule or all the talent of Richard the Lionheart? Since his dragon isn't a canonical dragon and is linked to the MC, does that make it any different?
I don't know about others, but to me, Gedeon is incredibly stupid. In the game, we defeat Maliketh, and this guy simply thinks, "Hmm, I think I can defeat him," and then we beat him up. That, to me, is what makes a guy incredibly stupid.
There's missing information here; this is just an initial impactful scene. But when the initial emotion passes, you notice a lot of errors, like why Balerion is alive, why the lords voted for Viserys if it harms them, why the MC doesn't have a wife when Queen Alysane married off all her grandchildren. This is practically a synopsis.