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zekuro5mthCommentedEmotion are only shackles if you see them as shackles. Looking at the title and what you wrote so far, I don't think the MC will be free from greed anytime soon...and yes, those are the results of emotion too.
I would like to expect freedom from the shackles of emotions and hormones from what should be better men. The power system in this book aims for self-supremacy( Supremacy of the mind and the body). So no, no romance or harem. There won't be a pursuit for the pleasure of the flesh.- zekuro5mthCommented
But if you end up as an emotionless robot who thinks of nothing but cultivation as a result of that "enlightenment", what is the point? It's not necessarily about romance, but about everything. Cultivation for the sake of cultivation must be about as boring and awful as working for the sake of working; nine times out of ten, it's a soulless and boring character that ends up being created. Just my two cents anyway. You're obviously free to write the story you want.
It should be considered that just maybe, maybe cultivation leads to more than just physical prowess. It should be considered that the enhancement that results from unlocking the mental and physical prowess of an organism will affect its emotions or how it perceives the world. - zekuro5mthCommented
That's a lot of very precise deduction from barely no clue at all...
'This means that I'm probably in the body of a 14-year-old,' Alex thought. - zekuro5mthCommented
Dog will kill you
'They injured the dog to lure me into this alleyway. A clever but cruel trick.' - zekuro5mthCommented
Who dares?
The dog's whining was very loud, high-pitched, painful, and desperate. Obviously, the dog was in a ton of pain. - zekuro6mthCommented
.........So it wasn't planned? I meaaaaan, it was so obvious, I knew it would happen the moment he saved the guy. I originally thought it was an "infiltration" mission then he would shamelessly plunder the whole thing using void skill, but I guess not...?
At this moment, although Kahn could easily escape using his skills and artifacts, he could only do it for himself. Albestros would be caught in the crossfire.. Something he couldn't afford to do. So for the sake of the old man, Kahn decided to surrender to the soldiers without putting up a resistance. - zekuro6mthCommented
To make a silly comparaison, New York would be around 27km long. Either the author made a big mistake in the number, or we just moved from starter wuxia town to end-game xianxia godcity.
Based on his calculations.. The capital itself was at least 2700 kilometers long. - zekuro6mthCommented
If the capital actually is 2700km long, this is actually a very small population number.
"Close to hundred and ten million, give or take." replied Szayel solemnly as if it was a common thing to know. - zekuro6mthCommented
Is that the 10th or 20th time this same paragraph has been repeated?
"What the hell is this?! Aren't I becoming too powerful too quickly? At this rate, I'll be able to kill that Demon God by tomorrow morning!" exclaimed Kahn with a bewildered expression on his face. - zekuro6mthCommented
Please refer to chapter 8 or something for exact conditions! ...........Kahn, seriously?
"System.. How did the Dimensional Law get unlocked so suddenly? What were the conditions?" asked Kahn. - zekuro6mthCommented
Unfortunately the stats still doesn't really make sense to me (not that i ever knew what the old stats were like). I think adding levels and stats were a mistake if you're not willing to be very thorough with it. Overall your system is ok as long as we ignore the level and stats.
Ch 114 The Biggest Beneficiary - zekuro7mthCommented
Author should re-read the first chapter x)
Elric, on the other hand received the least of their attention as he never showed any kind of promise in any sector even if was related to education. He was simply average at everything throughout his childhood days and weak when it came to physical sports and exercises. So they never thought highly of him. - zekuro7mthCommented
Good thing the guy didn't use a single of those scrolls, eh?
And there were more than 100 of these scrolls. He had hit a jackpot because if one day he were to face an opponent far stronger than him, these magic scrolls could help him fight and even win against the opponent or worse, help him escape if his life was in jeopardy. - zekuro7mthCommented
Quite the hypocrisy. Heartless enough to kill innocent men but not heartless enough to kill innocent women xD.
This made things easier for Kahn as he wasn't a heartless monster to kill innocent women & children. - zekuro7mthCommented
How many times will the same paragraph be repeated xD
This was a world where Law & Justice didn't apply to you as long as you held power and authority. It was a world where the strong preyed on the weak. - zekuro7mthCommented
What if some of them were innocent though?
As for the people Kahn killed.. Not a single one of them was a saint. Some had killed, some had rap*d women & even young girls under 18 years and some even killed the victims after they did the crime. But all of these people were declared innocent due to lack of evidence and witnesses. In some cases, the witnesses disappeared overnight before the hearing itself. The first book was completely filled with this information. Every page had one of such individuals and all the details on them. - zekuro7mthCommented
I somehow managed to accept Mind Link, but Mind Transfer just comes out from nothing lol. It's not Synthesis, it's Creation at this point.
[Mind Transfer (Rank C) (Upgradable) - zekuro7mthCommented
He speaks as if he knows the whole life story of the people he killed, even though he knows nothing. That's some pretty weak justification imo. You're just a merciless killer who would do anything for some benefits. Not necessarily a bad thing, but why the pointless justification? It feels self-righteous as heck.
So there was no need to feel sorry for someone who wouldn't think too much about the value of life in the first place. - zekuro7mthCommented
Says the guy who felt bad and made a vow after killing a snake.
"Finally, all the efforts are paying off. Nothing personal guys... It's just business." said Kahn as he relaxed his back against the tree trunk. - zekuro7mthCommented
Who made this guy an instructor? An instructor who didn't pass anyone in 10 year is just a failure, plain and simple.
Everyone present there screamed their lungs out as Kahn had finally broken the record by passing Arkham's assessment test which didn't happen in the past 10 years.