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how does purity of the bloodline works. wasn't it less than 0.001%. how did she got 10% to her. suggestions I don't personally dislike info dump. it just need some space between info dumps. and unique terms make it hard to follow the story. just with generic term some times.and introduce more characters.
some of us like info dump and rpg stuff. it just need to be more connected to the current phase of the story to not feel artificial or forced to the story. taking it slow always make it interesting when half of the stuff is still mysterious. thanks for the story.
I like the story so far. but it feels like your forcing to much detail and world building in each chapter. having unique terms and complicated monetary system isn't always a good thing it just makes it hard to follow the story.but I'm loving the story so far. thanks for the chapter
I have yet to read other book of yours. so I go with First option
thanks for the chapter
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