Nice work. I lik the way the story is progressing. The writer has also improved tremendously. However, I feel that more improvement is needed especially in the area of updating.

He is a pervert.

Some human are worse than vampires.

I didn't see that coming. That guy is a pervert.

I think Madeline is not ordinary. She may be a witch.

I think it has happened before.

Shameless Monster.

Little Monster indeed. Shameless Alex. Teasing an innocent girl.

Didn't want to believe that the King killed his Mother but what is it that he didn't want Maddy to find out?.

that he killed his mother.

This Lady Wilmot is fearless. The King was wrought when Maddy's Mum interfered in his relationship with Mandy. Imagine what will happen to Sophie's mum.

I hope so too.

It's true what they say about a person being a product of his or her experience. it shows that you cannot really judge a person becos you don't know what made him/ her turn out the way they did. What a sad childhood and sad story.

He may be more than fifty years.

Especially since that is what Grandfather wants. hahahahaha

Talk about blood sucking vampire. I am thoroughly surprised by Lady Catherine drinking blood and even killing her maid in the process. James is in for some tough times.

I hate when ML who started out so strong suddenly becomes pathetic. The FL should make Nick look pathetic in the name of revenge.

That will be nice.

I don't like the fact that she rejected the tailors gowns . Now she will be made to choose from James. That's robbing salt to James injury.

I see trouble brewing.