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Mrcheeset1yrCommentedLove this moment 😂
"Fuck!" Khan loudly cursed while gently pushing Monica down and straightening his position. He was fine now. His senses were slightly off, but his top shape was only seconds away.- Mrcheeset1yrCommentedCh 435 Leash
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Son -> soon
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Well no, you’re an initial commander and worried about fighting early commander mages. Def not on your level still fighting up a rank
'Sure enough, all my advantages only put me at the same base level as Mages. Everything else depends on me.' - Mrcheeset1yrCommented
I appreciate the speedrunning through the boring parts of the trial, would just be filler to describe him killing initial stage beasts
The fifth one needed Shang to release two strikes instead of one, but that was about it. - Mrcheeset1yrCommentedCh 332 Chapter 332 – Third Question
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Is this phrased correctly? It feels slightly off but I’m not sure how
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I love it
A purple-red membrane enveloped the knife while Khan thrust it forward. He didn't want to kill Rodney, but he didn't need his legs to speak. Maybe that injury would even push him to get to the point. - Mrcheeset1yrCommented
“Himself as his fiancée” is wrong I think, not sure
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Please, you already don’t have a clear conscience we had a mini arc over that
He had to decide between a slightly bigger increase in power for killing someone innocent or a normal increase in power with a clear conscience. - Mrcheeset1yrReplied to Enticement
Lightning is the Only Way has minimal romance that has very little impact on the story imo. Sword God in a World of Magic has no romance at all so far
"Correct," the young man said as he leaned back again. "However, you becoming powerful is exactly what will change the world." - Mrcheeset1yrReplied to Fade_Frags
Sounds like they fought the beasts with the aliens but didn’t fight the aliens? Not sure
Humans called these strange powers 'innate abilities', and with these powers they fought back against the beasts and mutants with all they had, along with the alien races. Finally, they were able to send them back through the rifts, sealing them temporarily. - Mrcheeset1yrCommented
Not sure this totally holds up. From this perspective the dean offered him power in the form of the procedure. Should he have turned it down because he didn’t earn it on his own? He needs the Gravis experience against the middle heaven where he learns his power isn’t all self earnes
"I think it's more about the journey and less about the goal," Shang explained. "On top of that, I want to achieve it on my own. If someone else were to hand me something, that something wouldn't have any value. I want to achieve my goal on my own. I want it to be something I can work towards." - Mrcheeset1yrCommented
What a dope idea Heat, really creative
"They can turn matter into Mana." - Mrcheeset1yrCommentedCh 159 Chapter 159 – True Power