light_the_fox

thor just burst from the story and ram the author its their fault your being rejected

small mistake towards the ending you have two "that" back to back

every alchemist family will hunt you down

if the golems went on imagination id so want ones that are horses like in Avatar with the six legs

if i was him i'd have any alchemists in the guild to make those fire resistance potions to feed my own pocket

minor spelling mistake "fron" to "from"

minor mistake "coke" to "come"

minor mistake the chapter count

green dragon randomized to a goblin how embarrassing will it be

shouldn't this have stayed a necklace cause if items can turn into another like a sword to a shield by upgrading this will become very confusing