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Willless self-liar?

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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin16d
    Commented

    In my language it can mean pain. Especially for children, like: I scratched my leg! It is very "Bobo". Or like: It is a big "Bobo"

     The green-skinned monster said: "I am the god, and next to me is my servant Bobo."
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    I am Son goku, suppressing the Dragon Ball world
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin1yr
    Posted

    Well, story is good nearly at everything, Just story flow is a bit hurried a few times, in my humble opinion. Well, I would prefer some more world building and explaining, it's not that hard as Nala exists near the Main Character.

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    Dragon ball Z: A True Saiyan
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    Well, it is, rare to see a dio story, well Jojo story to tell truly... but I'm going closer and closer to dropping. DIO even without additional cheats, is OP, and defeated mostly for plot armor, so raising it's opness is decreasing my eagerness to read. And too much system, too less story.

    Ch 8 Dio's Development- Stamps of Approval
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    Dio's Bizarre Adventures
    Anime & Comics · Liquid_Culture
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Replied to assazzzin

    OP, not OPEN. Sorry, auto editor.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    Re:Dragon Ball
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    Well... Good. Good! GOOD!!! Firstly, I really didn't want to read it - these near immortalities made we wary. But actually, it is magnificent! Try not to OPEN character and this story's brilliance will not fade. Ideas... Simple one - upgrading the bloodline, cultivators are able, and MC will be. Also simple, but with upgrade - devouring by shape shifting technique. Like - just eat it, or touch it or/and cover with Ki - and change the complex object(character+prey) into just character. It can be said that the devouring object is "inside" in some way, so remnants of making buu's ability should chew it.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14
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    Re:Dragon Ball
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Posted

    Well, too fast stiry development and not enough explanations on the start, but ki theories and divine ki exploitation in the original well explained. Very good.

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    Pilaf
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    I am looking forward for obstacles and repercussions. How MC will deal with and, more important, with what?

    Ch 1 The secrets of dragon ball
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    Pilaf
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    Cool! Thanks!

    Ch 1 The mystery of senzu beans
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    Pilaf
    Anime & Comics · An_Aa
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    Good! I like it! Really like non human characters, and in dragon ball, especially Pilaf - it suuuper cool. Buuuut... How did MC in a non developed village created high tech? Solar panels? Motor? Seriously? You need a hell of simpler technologies working to create it.

    Ch 1 Incoming humans
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    Pilaf
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    A pity. Truly. Though waiting for your return.

    Ch 88 Update
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    Life as Goku
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Commented

    Well... Not bad story, but text itself... well, lacks. And it is even for me - for whom English is not native. So, that's it. Just a bit of redaction, and a good fic will be born.

    Ch 5 Oolong and yamucha.
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    The time I was reincarnated as goku born with ssj4.
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin2yr
    Posted

    Well, it was, I must say, a truly rare specimen of good and (it unbelievably important) fully completed dragon ball fanfics. Believe it. Believe.

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    Broly The Saiyan of Legend!
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin3yr
    Posted

    Well, do not know about stability of updates, actually, but it is completed, so 5. Slightly not enough of plot and character - well, about MC, lacks early in everything on my taste, but really, really, little.

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    Hunter x Hunter: A Selfish Wish (COMPLETED)
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin3yr
    Commented

    Mei!!!

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    Reborn in Naruto As Madara's Grandson
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  • assazzzin
    assazzzin3yr
    Replied to Traps_Are_Gay

    Best recommendation to read I ever seen

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    supreme anime system
    Anime & Comics · Mutawakal_Abdi
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