Darth_Novel
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Darth_Novel1yrCommentedI picked up a corpse of a goblin and ate it.- Darth_Novel1yrCommented"Really, Gi'Gane? But still..."
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so far so good! keep it up!
This book has been deleted. - Darth_Novel2yrReplied to JAGuyr
you beat me to it
Surprisingly,, the game was a shinier shade of gold than any he had found so far. Elden World was highly fleshed out and basically complete, and Aldrich had sunk in hundreds of hours of gameplay in it. - Darth_Novel2yrPosted
Alright, author here, I just wanted to take this shameless author review to say some things about this novel. 1. I've had this idea brewing in my mind for a couple months now, and I finally took the initiative to start writing it. It was first going to be a psychological horror. then, it turned into something about chess, and now, it is about a boy who just wants to have a good life. He is the definition of a normal human being put into a situation he doesn't want to be in. In the first chapters, Nate will appear more dense and confused. That, I think, is a normal reaction of someone who was killed and left in a black abyss without any of the five senses. 2. This is going to be more serious, so if your looking for a light comedy, this isn't it. I still encourage you to try it out, though! 3. I'm going to try to be as realistic with this as possible, so if you want a wish fulfillment character, your not going to get it 4. I will try to develop the world/kingdom as much as possible, so stay tuned for that 5. I'm going to be doing the best I can in the grammar and stability section. Hopefully I can write, at least, 3 chapters a week. At the beginning the chapters aren't going to be that long, but I hope to change that the further along I get. If you have any criticism or questions, leave a commit on this thread and I will try my best to answer them.
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and this, kids, is why you? don't join cults
"I must purify the children! They won't become monsters! I won't let it!" She screamed as she trashed around violently to no avail, even with a single finger her movements were futile. - Darth_Novel2yrReplied to JUST_LAUGH
I would like, but I cannot disrupt the holy number.
So, without any further ado, I stood up from my bed. My body feels like it is submerged into the sea of mud — heavy as fuck! What did 'I' did? Don't tell me that I was fapping the whole night? - Darth_Novel2yrCommented
I did it again folks. I liked every single comment with nice. time to let the cycle continue... Nice
Magic : 69 - Darth_Novel2yrCommented
I liked EVER SINGLE comment that had the word "NICE" in it. Now I must continue the cycle... NICE!
When he looked at the vault number, he had a strange feeling because it was number 69. - Darth_Novel2yrCommentedCh 2 Selection
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I had to go listen to leaves of the vine after reading that paragraph, and I'm proud to admit it's the only thing that makes me cry.
Before falling into the world of slumber, I traced a line in the air with my fingers, I had some goals I wanted to accomplish, I wanted to be the best water bender, I wanted to be the strongest blood bender, and most importantly, I wanted to find Iroh and have some tea with him. - Darth_Novel2yrCommentedWands turning into bouquets of flowers, people being cut in two and even young women levitating over the tables without any visible support, all these things were very fun to watch but in the end, you knew that they weren't real and there always was a rational explanation to them, no matter if you knew it or not. I didn't believe in magic, at the time, then I died, and woke up in a new world, with a Titaness for a mother and power in my hands beyond my comprehension, and let me tell you, it feels good.
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I only have one word... cthulhu
These dozens of weirdos seemed to be chanting the same name. - Darth_Novel3yrCommented
just cuz you can't see it, doesn't mean it's not there
Gustav had really grown to like Boss Danzo. Also, he couldn't see the scheming and vileness in his eyes like the way he saw other people. - Darth_Novel3yrCommented
reading this gave me a stroke
"As everyone knows, the Dazzling Sunlight Artery connects to the Green Ivy Channel. Performing the Nine Revolution Qi Condensation Spell and drawing vital energy will allow one to attain Heavenly Essence. Not only this, but one can still use the Tranquil Ring Technique and work in harmony according to the concentration of vital energy in the air. Completing this through the Tian Hua Formula will allow us to reduce the spell runtime of the Flame spell…" Earth Immortal Cang Qing spoke in an unhurried manner.