I’m a dude in high school who wants to write random stories about the stuff I think of in my head, bc some of that 🔥 needs to be adapted into something!
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Don’t worry about it, it’s a nit pick, your first chapter was infinitely better then most of the top 10 weekly books out rn, couldn’t bring myself to read them.
Great first chapter, a big lengthy but understandable since it’s the first and you need to get the concepts across, he I do think goe’s professions should have been more defined
I read less then a page and I hate it, the main character is a random seller whose poor but is perfectly healthy and super hot n handsome apparently, and he gets the best stuff by luck, yeah a bunch of nonsense