Raick
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Raick1mthCommentedDo you guys want me to come back and continue writing this? I'm only asking since I'm not sure if anyone is interested in this story any longer. Do note that I'll switch the POV into the third person POV since it's stupid to write about a blind dude in first person lol, wish I would've thought about that before.- Raick2mthCommented"You fool, I never left. I have simply mastered the art of standing so still I become invisible to the naked eye... I thank you for telling me of it, Master." The Saber that had been their final enemy not a few days ago now sat in their cafeteria, giving a small nod of gratitude to Nicholas.
- Raick2mthCommentedItsuki put Satsuki on his lap and let Kushina hold Naruko. Satsuki's lips curved up slightly as she threw a short glance at Naruko. Naruko had a betrayed expression on her face as she gazed at her father...
- Raick2mthCommented"We love her very much," I nodded, putting an arm around Didi so we could both stand there like the proudest parents in the world.
- Raick2mthCommented"Mhm, naive! How very naive my Master!" As if she was about to do one of the greatest things she'd ever done, Martha practically ripped a card out of her own grip and slammed it down on the rocky ground hard enough to crack it, kicking up dust that momentarily blinded everyone, "Let this be a lesson!"
- Raick2mthCommented
What do you think of Ten Ten for Naruto? You can even made her want to train under Itsuki for the grind 👀 💁♂️Its just a suggestion, do what you feel like doing. Also nice chapter 🤩
This paragraph has been deleted. - Raick2mthCommentedYugao gazed at the dish in front of her with sparkling eyes, it just looked.... so delicious! Mapu Tofu was the name of the dish.
- Raick2mthCommentedAnd with Tim, that meant 100 percent effort, all the time. He worked hard for everything he had and he deserved way more recognition than he usually got.
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- Raick2mthCommentedOlga smiled confidently, "Astromancy is the study of the stars... Putting it in terms you can understand is slightly difficult though..." The Director of Chaldea rubbed her chin thoughtfully, ignoring the dirty look Nicholas was throwing her way, "Wait, I got it. You know how stars are in the sky, right?"
- Raick3mthCommentedSighing, Nicholas walked over to the lights and flipped them on before walking over to her aquarium, "Did I tell you you have some cool ass fish?" Seriously, there was one with whiskers like a Chinese elder.
- Raick4mthCommented
Amazing work
Some feedback for this slightly rejuvenated soul? - Raick4mthCommented
I just need him to have a very good frienship with the different Marthas and just watch how they punch through everything 👊
How are you liking this so far? - Raick6mthCommentedCh 51 Those Few Fools
- Raick7mthCommentedWe had a short back and forth with which artist make the best doujins but in the end Marin agreed with my opinion.
- Raick7mthCommented"how foolish of you to even come close to me while holding this weapon"
- Raick7mthCommentedAbsolutely depending on him emotionally and always quite unstable for whatever reason.
- Raick9mthCommented
I read something similar before (canary genes and that) and I think if you have that much abilities and power ups it should take time to use it correctly and to upgrade it. But looks interesting.
This is what I've come up with so far, it's a lot but then again it might also be too much. What do you guys think? Leave Any comments or questions in the comments section or on the specific paragraphs.