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toxicshrimp3yrCommentedNoticed it a few times now, the saying is “little to no” not “little but no”
''That little system just loved to lecture you about risking your life, yet he ambushes you to fight a hollow without a warning. Talented as you might be, you had little but no combat experience and this was the one situation at which you were the most vulnerable.'' The kid said, snapping his fingers for yet a second time while that specific door vanished.- toxicshrimp3yrCommented
“I need to handle some unfinished business with you”
''A midget! Now sit there and wait. I need to handle a few unfinished business with that brother of yours.'' Kuromiya turned towards the man in question, smirking as he noticed that both Yoruichi and Byakuya had been listening to their conversation for a while. - toxicshrimp3yrCommented
very good so far. the only thing that's kinda odd about it is this 30 second bookmark of his is supposed to be a last resort but he kind of just blows through it whenever he finds it convenient. I don't think there's been a single battle since he figured it out that he hasn't used it. Maybe another attack or something to change up the pace of the fights. at this point it's kind of just "wait for the bookmark for a w..."
Ch 26 I didn't. - toxicshrimp3yrCommented
“Not for a second did he think it would...”. Little bit of improper grammar there
'Fat chance of that happening.' Kuromiya thought, never for a second he thought it would be a good idea to warn them about their imminent separation, it was in his best interest to be with as few of them as possible. - toxicshrimp3yrReplied to Caleb_Morris
that's fine. but there are more than a few instances the time is either totally halted, or jumps inconsistently.
With that Quinn decided to sleep for the night and wait till the next day. - toxicshrimp3yrReplied to Amv_125
1v1, there is no one who could stand to madara, not even close. but there are plenty of times madara fought without using susano'o. such as his fight against gai. if you don't think ol' decay boy combined with a few nomu could stand up to madara and effectively deal some damage, while not kill him they could certainly make him fight for real, then there isn't really a point to this conversation
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