Elena_Nickel
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Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedalmost as if, she
Aila left her room, her mindset on finding the kitchen and retrieving some painkillers. Yet, as soon as she stood outside her door in the hallway, she stopped and gazed at her surroundings, the natural light glimmered through the mansion, and she began to feel nostalgic. Aila recognised the hallway she stood in; glancing to the left, she saw a grand set of white double doors at the end of the hall. Frowning, she started to make her way to them, almost as is she was being called towards them.- Elena_Nickel2yrCommented
she glared at Yman
He glared at Yman and saw him raise his brow like a typical villain. She hates him! She hates him very much! - Elena_Nickel2yrCommented
drool inducing ; is proper sentence structure here.
"Huh? What...?" Sylvia asked, watching the man deftly buttoning a crisp egg white color shirt, that covered his broad chest and his drooling inducing abdominal muscles. - Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 29 The night when it all began
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now , wanting should be not,wanting
He danced for an hour with her until her heels ached, until her back pained. She stifled a pained groan, now wanting to show her vulnerability to him. With a cold grin, he ended the dance. She staggered a little and he led her to his guests. - Elena_Nickel2yrCommented
just how old is he?
Just old is he? How many boars has he killed and skinned at this young age? - Elena_Nickel2yrCommented
the sentence says cut off guard and it should be caught off guard
I stop by the kitchen first to fill up my water bottle, but I’m cut off guard by the faint scent of my mate, a calmness washed over me like a wave of cold water distinguishing a raging fire. - Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 265 Opening of the inside competition
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 255 Allrounder Ambassador
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instead of using (voice out) at the end of this sentence you could end it with (say).
"Are you nervous?" He suddenly heard Rea's question while they were slowly walking the palace corridors. Probably, he noticed her unsettled eyes."Of course not," he replied. 'It was more of an ecitement than nervous.' He thought but did not voice out. - Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 245 The rise of Little Garden Department
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 230 Brother Don’t Cry
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 226 5D-Seer, Citadel, Virtual Arena
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 220 The Next Level Elixir
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 197 Top rank
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 195 Now it's my turn
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 194 Magic Array
- Elena_Nickel2yrReplied to Elena_NickelCh 183 Department of Alchemy
- Elena_Nickel2yrCommentedCh 183 Department of Alchemy