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Would be EQ, IQ is for pattern recognition and EQ is emotional intelligence
Where? I’m trying to find the actual author
Didn’t say it wasn’t, and it’s not a love hate in actual DC. Was just pointing out, the author wasn’t going with what DC said. Ur fighting ghosts man
I just looked it up, apparently Lucifer absolutely loathes Constantine
Definitely not even neutral, you’ve written a psychopath. If he needs info, literally all he has to do, and this is from the chapter with the riddler, is scan his brain. You have him needlessly torturing people, for information he can get at, literally, the flick of a wrist.
I highly doubt that, if he had a good heart he’d just knock him out and scan his brain. He’s quite literally needlessly torturing him. You introduce character pothole after character plothole, it’s like you don’t even temper what you write before. It’s astonishing
And he has an issue with materials how? If he can create these things, materials are not an issue. The big problem with making a character this smart is, no person is that smart, so it’s really hard to write something entertaining or realistic. I like the concept, but you’ve failed pretty hard on the execution, you have to instantly suspend so much belief and can’t apply any logic or knowledge of actual physics to the story. It’s quite literally like watching looney tunes, might as well have given him that power. No matter how smart you are, it doesn’t allow you to destroy the laws of physics.