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I am Ready and welcome to the Mov Literary Universe

2020-03-31 JoinedGlobal
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    Ready_2h
    Replied to UnKnownEntity001

    Not in the typical sense

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    Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
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  • Ready_
    Ready_2d
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    Welcome, It's me, the author. I am Ready and here is the obligatory five-star review from me to myself, I can't judge my own book objectively, so I'll simply provide some basic information. -There is no actual romance of any kind involving the protagonist, if you think you see some, it is naught but humour. -The main character is a skeleton that goes by the name of Loimos, as far as sapient corpses go, he is meant to be an undead through and through, everything is for the sake of the dead. -The release rate is two chapters per day, and I intend on keeping it as such until I, or this book, meet our end. If you have any questions, go ahead and asks them below.

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    Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
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  • Ready_
    Ready_17d
    Replied to aMz

    My thanks for the gifts

    Ch 1 Witnessing A Miracle
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    Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
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  • Ready_
    Ready_26d
    Replied to JBFIRE_77

    Don’t worry, no romance, just jocking around with the idea, a corpse can’t have romantic feelings

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    Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1mth
    Replied to OverlyCookedBacon

    My thanks for the kind words

    Ch 18 Desperation
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    Pestilence: Rise Of The Pure Undead
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  • Ready_
    Ready_3mth
    Commented
    Creating New Memories Together
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Ready_
    Ready_4mth
    Posted

    The concept and ideas seem pretty nice so far (11 chapters), the story seems to set up to be one of vengeance with a hint of dark powers, though, the first few chapters are held back by the constant switches between first and third person, an issue which is resolved later on but the problem still remain at the very start of the novel, I would suggest a overhaul of the chapters with this issue. The writing isn't bad by any means, but it isn't fluid, in the sense that there are some mistakes that are pretty much impossible to miss, which brings the reading to a stop and hinders the flow severely. Another minor issue, which might not be one for everyone, I personally find the chapters a bit too lengthy, not certain if its just me imagining things. If I am not delusional, then cutting the number of words to around 1000, no less, would be beneficial. All in all, this is the author's first book by the looks of it, the few problems I noted are only natural and will most certainly be erased as they get more experience. Look forward to the future. Also, since I know the author worships Esdeath:

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  • Ready_
    Ready_7mth
    Replied to Tog_Python

    Well, it is a fairly basic fantasy world and as for the system, it is the somewhat extensive but standard system I use for most of my stories with one, nothing too special about it, XP, skills and such, although it isn't very prevalent in Draconic Madness, as with most of my short stories

    Ch 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
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    Story Of Mov: Draconic Madness
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  • Ready_
    Ready_7mth
    Replied to Tog_Python

    I don’t have any good image for the dragon unfortunately, what do you want to know about the world exactly?

    Ch 6 You And I, We Have No Faces
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    Story Of Mov: Draconic Madness
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  • Ready_
    Ready_9mth
    Replied to Jay_Woods_2344

    I left it up to interpretation, so my opinion is as good as anyone else’s, I personally consider him to be human

    Ch 8 Gone Forever?
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    Horror Of Mov: The Slasher Of Olive Grove
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  • Ready_
    Ready_10mth
    Replied to Evolwolf

    The Hunchback Of Notre Dame (1996) By Disney

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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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    Ready_1yr
    Replied to Absolute_Qlipoth

    Thanks for the nice comment, don’t worry I don’t plan to go on any hiatus before this book is over

    Ch 126 Emotional Support Elf (ESF)
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    Volition
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Commented

    I see it is taking another direction this time

    Ch 4 My hell!
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    My horror summoning system
    Horror · Crak
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Replied to UED

    Indeed

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    Volition
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    This story has cured my human limitations and allowed me to truly become an ultimate being. I don't have much else to say as my focus is utterly turned to my new capacities but the book is quite nice, certain people will surely find the premise absolutely baller and I would recommend to follow through with your interest.

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    A World Where Women Are the Rulers
    Fantasy · mattfuncool
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    I have read many stories in my time, as well as given my fair share of review, never have I ever done so out of the free will of my very own brain but anyhow, today I will review 'Tales Of Isfet' by unknown author 'slowpokeChaos' who apparently doesn't put capitalization at the start of their own name, proof that they don't think much of themselves and, by extension, of their own work. However, this story has brought me something marvelous, much like many other stories I enjoyed reading through it but unlike with the past stories, this one brought enlightenment to me, I have been able to shed my former body like a catterpillar (literally), I have advanced to a greater state of being. Thank you author! As for the rest, I guess it's fine.

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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    Writing is pretty good, the updates seem to be coming out at a regular pace, the story seems to be developping at a good pace as well, I would recommend giving it a look.

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    The Hypocrite(s)
    Games · BugatiCatForm
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    The quality of the writing is very good and feels somewhat simplistic in a good way, it makes you feel strangely involved in what is happening for some reason, the updates seems to be coming out at a fairly regular pace, the story may feel like its developping slowlyat times but it didn't hinder the reading, overall, I would recommend to give it a read.

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    My Students Are Vampires!
    Fantasy · Little_Foxxy
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    Author here, this novel isn't exactly focused on a single character but the idea with the MC was for him to embody a concept, not one that is already out here but one that I made up myself, if you have any question go ahead and ask them here.

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    Volition
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  • Ready_
    Ready_1yr
    Posted

    The quality of the writing is very good, I don't have any memory of any misspelt word or of any grammatical error, the updates seem to be relatively common and the story advances as a good pace, I would recommend giving it a try.

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    His Highness prince Jin insanely pampered wife
    History · Little_North_Star
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