soren

Expired code

First few chapters where great not very many mix ups on the genders. But by chapter 16 the genders get mixed up and make the story very hard to follow. Hopefully it get a re-read through by the author or editor to correct the mistakes that are pointed out by other readers. Other wise this book is very good, has a good story line and grabs attention just needs to have some grammar fixed to prevent readers from not reading it due to the confusion

Raith raven dellagado

It should say daggers not sword because it is a set of dual daggers

I love the story so far. it starts off with a sad start for the main character but over all you feel like the main character is someone you could relate to and also understand. the main character has the hardest time i honestly cant wait to see how he over comes each problem he faces. Thanks for the story Hope you keep on writing

So awesome now that he is focused on the basics to be come stronger due to lost of magic

Charlotte not the other name

Love how he is able to start his collection of spirit beasts just like he want to become a beast tamer

Love the story so far i wonder if he will regain all of his memories or if he trys to forget Them

I cant wait for more chapters to be released