Enigma_9135

Is this fic dropped?

the rookie( Cause her mom is in LAPD)

I will say add the suffixes as the sentence otherwise loses the original feel and context and comes as a little disrespectful when 1st years talk this way to seniors.

No consistency with already written words. Brainless MC. Not knowing the original character's mindset and personality.

good work, don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

I've liked it so far. Just some grammatical issues at times but not many of them. so, keep it up man!

Try to include some other shows characters like if u are going with the whole doctor thing u can include shows like House, or some other comedy shows like big bang theory. Just a suggestion.

Is this going to be a thing where no single topic ever reaches a proper conclusion?

The story and character development is very good. The only issue would be grammar as there are some mistakes but still readable and able to understand.Good Work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

skip to fairy tail reunion, if u want to add something use flashbacks later.