PensivePrincess
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I guess she knows she's Tang Tang... Curious how she got her identity as Gu Li after she was presumed dead...
I'm getting tired 'chasing' the run-on sentences. I would've preferred if they were split into 2 or 3 sentences instead as run-on sentences can easily cause confusion.
dragged not drugged
foolproof
on his way out
that the man was showing.
only to find Ace there
pleasure is all yours
the hand that was holding the pen
Lloyd is becoming suspicious...
That would be great! Thank you. It would probably help to have an editor go over the story. I'm only a few chapters in and I hope it doesn't disappoint.
Licked? You mean leaked, meaning made public, right?
Wontons/Dumplings becoming ravioli. This is what happens when Chinese novels are westernized. I would've liked this better if they didn't change the names and settings. It's quite difficult to figure out the characters from the previous series.