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Not bad, but not to my taste. It feels like the whole premise of the book is the MC suffering. Reminds me of Worm tbh. It’s also slow paced. Worth a look, but won’t be to everyone’s taste.
Interesting concept, but very poor execution. The English is well done, but the MC is poorly developed and is seemingly stupid. Even for a FanFiction, the original cast is too ooc.
With how you have written, it would be illogical not to try and hatch/control the dragons. They are an asset I don’t think the MC would avoid simply due to distaste.