A Gem, i would place this novel with Warlock of magus world simply based on potential, the characters arent cutouts they make rational and irrational decisions that fit there character Im very happy that a new original has found its way to the top Pros Potential for the story to go anywhere Origional idea that has a unique spin on an monster system Stable uploads Im not able to guess the plot or what will happen next Cons I need more chapters and the chapters fly by due to this Give it a try, its intriguing where the story is progressing with little predictables that are a common turn off for the fantasy oriented genre..... Anyway you said your going to rewrite it? It fine I guess, you only had 10 chap..

dang! so good release more chap

Hmmm. looking forward to your novel.

Arrogant author.

Hmmm.. nice