Wheel of time

I see Chinese names I leave

The novel began with an amazing pace, the start with the training, then going to the world of Absolver was okay, but after going to DarkSouls the quality went downhill.

It was all good, but now I see more and more grammar mistakes. .. ..

You said that his hair turned ash gray when he first turned into a neo demon but now his hair is black....

That's because there is some rich dude pumping stones and adds on the novel.

I think author doesn't even give a glance at our comments....

*Slap

If the system is some sort of remnant of a woman's will, or she is some higher being... then this is really stupid and generic, I've read tons of similar novels…. I hope not

It started well with minor mistakes, then it went down hill. It's full of plot holes, maths in this novel is a clusterfuck. I don't suggest reading this.

lol I am a machine translation reader, and I feel you bro xD

zeus would never say I am here mom! lol he would rather use I am here Mother....

I'm skipping all the romance chapters and where tiana is mentioned lol

harem- trash

A little annoyed, not annoying Sir :)

Isn't yamato a girl in canon?

chine xD

This is machine translation, at least try to edit it a little bit.

I'll be waiting, and good luck with collage and life mate

yeh right, new projects that will end up dropped, no thanks.