I love sewing Finn's POV, though I do wish you'd gone into more detail on why he was still with other girls after finding his mate even though he liked her. Great job though!

This chapter was great! I noticed a few minor grammer or spelling mistakes but nothing major. I look forward to the next chapter ♡

Although thr Grammer is a sometimes a little off it isnt bad enough to really take away from the story, which itself is really addicting. I hope to see ot updated soon

I really hope you continue soon, I am really enjoying your story ♡