AK_Walls
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2020-03-26 JoinedUnited States
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AK_Walls1yrCommentedThe correct word (coincidence) finally. Hope it wasn’t coincidental.
She paused when her eyes fell on the engagement ring which was on the table, and she picked it up and looked it over before sliding it down her finger, "Perfect size, huh? Coincidence or Fate?" She asked herself with a crooked smile and raised a hand to her lips when she remembered that they had actually kissed... The kiss had even been good enough to elicit a moan from her... But she would be damned if she was going to tell him how electrifying and satisfying the kiss had been. She wasn't going to be the one to feed his oversized ego.- AK_Walls1yrCommented
A lot of misgendering- referring to FL as “he” or “him” and other male characters as “she” or “her” again (it occured in the first few chapters then it improved later on but now it’s back).
Yun chujiu, this fellow, completely didn’t care about these things. This fellow had his own fallacies. Since spiritual sense could grow, then this thing was like spiritual energy. If it was gone, then it could be replenished. - AK_Walls1yrPosted
What’s good about it is that the writing style is very direct and straightforward so there are no redundant descriptions spanning for decades and unnecessary encounters to expand word count. What’s not so good about it is that it’s too direct and straightforward that there’s no plot buildup and transitions so it becomes rather dry after a while.