demonic_joe9

bro, don't mind what other people say . if it's criticism or not, just take it to improve your book or just ignore them. in my opinion, this is a very decent work. i like the interaction between characters. you can still improve your writing and believe when i say there's a lot of potential in this book and the author

+1

thanks for the chapter

thnks philip

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w fanfiction keep up the work bro all the support

thanks for the chapter

thanks for the chapter 😊and author-san i suggest that you start including some canon characters and make them interact with the mcalso idk if there would be any romance ( no harem pls ) but i would prefer if you focus bit on emotions and all that stuff you know naruto anime is more of drama . yeah and thnks

bro this shit is lit 🔥 i have high expectations for it and hopefully we get longer chapters